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A Dragon and a Hero
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A Dragon and a Hero |
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Xillus_Xavier Member
since 2007-10-05
Posts 72Alabama |
This is just a little acrostic piece I made for a fantasy contest on another website. Since I have to wait till the end of the month to see if it wins or not, I just want to see what other people think of it. Note: This is a two part poem. A Dragon and a Hero A Dragon Death and destruction descends like a storm - creature of legend and mythical form. Reaping the lives of the women and men - flames of the winged one scorching their skin. Agony, terror and hopelessness reigns - children are crying with fear in their veins. Giant and scaly, with hell colored eyes, beast of the ancient rains fire from the skies. Only the strongest survive the attack - dreading the day that the creature comes back. No man or weapon has challenged the scourge. hope that a hero will someday emerge. A Hero Hope brings a hero to vanquish a beast. Evil had driven its blood thirsty feast. Ruthless and epic - the battle campaign. Ode to the hero - the dragon is slain. [This message has been edited by Xillus_Xavier (11-25-2007 10:54 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I like this! good luck with the competition... I'm sure you will excel!  RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello Your words seem to my ear, to be in perfect cadance, and what better hero, than Hope. Much enjoyed! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
X-X Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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