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Open Poetry #41

This Kind of Bliss

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-11-22 06:50 PM

This Kind of Bliss

Don't get the notion
that just because
you want devotion
it will be yours.

Consider this,

it takes two hearts
in agreement to create
this kind of bliss.

JamesLee
22November
2007

Bronzeage
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since 2007-07-20

Posts 197

1 posted 2007-11-23 12:52 PM

A nice piece. Very well stated.

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

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Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2007-11-23 01:14 AM

Thats so true

Hope

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-11-23 03:16 AM

Thank you Bronzeage and HopeS for the wonderful responses...James

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-11-23 08:27 AM

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2007-11-24 10:51 PM

James.. your words always make sense to me - enjoyed this piece my sweet friend... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Aflame
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since 2007-10-06

Posts 11

6 posted 2007-11-24 11:09 PM

I like this, especially the last stanza!

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

7 posted 2007-11-25 02:09 AM

How true James, enjoyed the read.

Rick

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

8 posted 2007-11-28 05:44 PM

Well admonished. Yes it does take two - and one can just sit in the corner and wait sometimes.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

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Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2007-11-28 07:09 PM

Lovely JamesMichael

ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

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Australia, Victoria

10 posted 2007-11-28 07:49 PM

Short but true James, enjoyed.

Lindsay

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2007-11-29 04:22 AM

Thank you Earth Angel, Roniece, Aflame, Rick, Pilgrimage, Artic Wind and Lindsay for the wonderful responses...James

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