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For my son, the Captain ... over there ...
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For my son, the Captain ... over there ... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is an edited repost inspired by current events and Aziza's work "His Mother's Son - A Soldier." ~*~ Forgive me if I don’t dwell on global warming or the displacement of hundreds of people in Afghanistan. My mind is filled with prayer and hope … even fear … tho’ I try to ignore that feeling. I pray for all our boys and girls over there and I fear for their safety. But most of all I pray for the boy whom I watched take his first steps. The boy whom I taught to play football And baseball. The boy that was on the dean’s list, a member of the FCA, a respectful, honorable, brave, and loving boy. Now a Captain, a leader of men. He leads by being the example of duty, honor, respect, and he will lead his soldiers, and His children, back home, safely. ~*~ As a Post Script, my son brought back all 200+ souls in his company alive from their combat tour. A feat so far unmatced in recent U.S. Army MP Corps history! He is now a Major teaching and commanding at the U.S. Military Academy at West Point, assigned to the Air Force Academy in Colorado Springs, CO. Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
May your son return to you safely, and soon. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Interloper Your father's heart is full...I'll pray for him/them too.  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am proud of him too - and I am glad that he is teaching now. And I am thankful for all the families that had their loved one come home to them because of your son. My heart is full of caring and love for those who serve so honorably. I have tears for them when they need them and my arms can never hug enough. Alison/aziza |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing and a wonderful report that they came back safely...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You taught him well... he'll carry that on and pay it forward to others. Give him our Thanks, this, and every day. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Heartfelt and endearing as I remember another time, place and war...and the many prayers shared M |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
heart felt Indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your poems always touch my heart... this one especially so. *S* Please thank him for me... for all of us. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a fine young man, you have for a son. I would wager that the acorn did not fall far from his father, the oak.  Quite an impressive feat! ~ A captain bringing all 200 of his troops safely back home! Your poem really hit home, with me. You must also be proud of his present day accomplishments as a: ~ "Major teaching and commanding at the U.S. Military Academy at West Point, assigned to the Air Force Academy in Colorado Springs, CO." Sending a big hug to both you and your son! EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoperLove~ Such love from the heart of the father~  My immense admiration and respect for your son and for all of the United States of America's troops who give so unselfishly of themselves for our safety and freedoms~ God bless them all~ *HUGLETS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Congratulations on your son's accomplishment. We should pray for our soldiers wherever they serve, for they protect us and our right to pray. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thoroughly enjoyed the read, my friend and very glad he and all of his made it back safetly... j. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
My brother is over in Baghdad. I'm happy that your son is back.  This is so very touching. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
well it's been a long time since I read anything of yours, and I really see reflections of the kind of heart that I once had the kind that only heals if it hurts first, for some; outside influences like wars in the middle east are the kinds of things that cut deep, you are lucky to have him home.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Doctor Love, your poem brought tears to my eyes as I know exactly the feelings you have had. You must be extremely proud of your Major and so glad he and his troops made it back safe! ....jo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know I don't think I could stand having a son or daughter leave to go to war, I really don't. I can't imagine how full a parent's heart gets with love and also fear, and I am just thrilled he is safe, and surely thank him and those like him from the bottom of this mother's heart. Beautiful heartfelt poem - just beautiful. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I loved your poem and the humanity of it. "my son brought back all 200+ souls in his company alive from their combat tour" should be blazoned across the headlines of international newspapers and TV screens instead of the sadness and badness that is there instead. This proves that good things happen. We just don't see it or make it enough about it. - Owl |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 OUTSTANDING! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You do have reasons to be proud of your son! ... and he of you! Love, Margherita |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I am proud, too, of your son and heartfelt appreciation for his leadership and gifts. His record is indeed impressive, but I feel his heart and spirit coming through your words. I wish you all the presence of peace and harmony this Christmas and in days to come. ~ Karen |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my! I have tears in my eyes.. being a Mother of a son, it's all too close.. you must be so proud of your precious one.. thank you for sharing your heart felt words with us.. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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