Open Poetry #41 |
Timeless Autumn Love |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Timeless Autumn Love Somewhere, mid these sweeping starfields of the vast-eternal cosmic sea, around an infinitesimal bend in the ever grand and dazzling Milky Way, sails this tiny ‘lifeship’ Gaia water-world. Here... (where humble raindrops become rivers moving mountains) may her spirit choose to walk in relentless beauty, through incorruptible Time, moving me as well by Love ...for such an eternity, to remember her...simply... as the colors of all the Autumn days... that ever were! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ahhha you gotta know I love this one!! Sooooooo beautiful! |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Very nice piece. I enjoyed this very much. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"sails this tiny ‘lifeship’ Gaia water-world. Here... (where humble raindrops become rivers moving mountains)" ~ Love the poetic skin you're in! Poetry seeps out of your every pore and into your pen! Linda |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Romantic to the core....simply wonderful! Naome |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
!!!!! Absolute Romantic. wait for #2 and #3 and more Beautiful, and emotional truly Tomtoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, dear poet, for such a gorgeous write!!!! Gaia smiles..... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bruce......Ok, this one made me tear-up. So well captured, the feeling with the words. Thank you. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Perfect |
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