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The Dream.
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The Dream. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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I dreamt we drove, deeper into a moment. Through landscapes of our making and darkened greens. I dreamt that we laughed,talked, kissed,proclaimed love for each other, while the world was blurred and only you were in sharp focus. I dreamt of tolerance, patience, companionship, understanding, joy? Natural meant to be interaction, for people to see, to envy? I woke to a nightmare of half opposites. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
lovely Phil... I do so like your words  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting 'write' (particularly the ending!) [To me, the "Runaway American Dream" seems to be a nightmare of Full opposites] Applause! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
lovely ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May the dream continue ~ even in the light of day!   Linda |
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Bleeding Ink Junior Member
since 2007-11-12
Posts 31 |
while the world was blurred and only you were in sharp focus. great camera! loved this one line! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
 You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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