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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2007-11-17 02:00 AM


Poets never have enough time
to say what's on their minds,
I know I'll be thinking
'til the very last second
about all those words I'll leave behind.
And since time is my master,
and a cruel one at that,
I had better write faster
or I'll die in mid-sentence
and that will be that.
                   Ida Werrett

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (11-17-2007 03:48 AM).]

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latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
1 posted 2007-11-17 08:40 AM


This is cute.I was happy to see it was time and not your man that was the Master! "late"
oceanvu2
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since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066
Santa Monica, California, USA
2 posted 2007-11-17 10:55 AM


Delightful!  The ending is a stitch!

Best, Jim

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-17 11:57 AM


this is sooo cute

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2007-11-17 12:12 PM


"Coming Master" ~ I used to jokingly say (or perhaps it was not in jest ) that to my wasband when he was my husband! lol

Keep writing as fast as you can! ~ and I'll keep on reading your words as fast as I can!

~ and please, do not die in mid-sentence! That would leave all your readers in a quandary!

Love to you, Ida Dear!

Linda

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2007-11-17 01:31 PM


Thank you all for your comments.
Don't worry, Late I'm not the kind of women who would ever consider a man her master. I am a one man woman (40 years when he passed away) but time is my only "master".
                                     Ida

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