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Oh, Masculine
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Oh, Masculine |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh Masculine Impulse driven given voice Guttural, exudes emotion Strong and lean as tapers choice All to the wall, rock hard devotion Turned to lather ‘neath his touch The clay he shapes in winsome To wit, his razor songs spill such Surged melody of crimson And yet the soft in seem contour With zeal, his mouthed percussion Adventures taste of whispers pure Man sounds our soul discussion Copyright Kkh 7/24/07 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (07-24-2007 10:22 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Have you been spying beneath the door to the bathroom? I wanna know.... Well done Lady K. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
simply beautiful. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you speak man so well TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
TD, sure sounds good to me! *hugs*....jo |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
Clever with a hint of a sardonic smile. I really enjoyed this. |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
I am humbled in my existence which you so observingly described..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
man sounds *sigh* lovely poem |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
it's a vague memory...  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You write man with an expert hand. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
for all its exquisite beauty and form, I liked these lines best: "With zeal, his mouthed percussion Adventures taste of whispers pure" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Turned to lather ‘neath his touch" ~ 'Tis no wonder!!!  Oh, the wonder of man! Me likeee, too! Lovely write, TD EA  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Ditto Dixie on this gem of a poem, TD. Patricia |
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