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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-11-15 10:14 AM



I Try To Keep Positive

Continuation I hoped for
I had written nothing new
Many unfinished poems
Nothing much I could do

Its this over active mind
Thoughts sent to and fro
Verses being set aside
Awaits to follow the flow

I feel like I am stranded
On the paths to nowhere
While needing an outlet
I scribble here and there

As I try to keep positive
Tomorrow is another day
Maybe poems will build
Like steps along the way

Hope ©2007
Poem with music and graphic here below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91012358.html

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Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-11-15 03:33 PM


lovely hope

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2007-11-15 04:55 PM


As I try to keep positive
Tomorrow is another day
Maybe poems will build
Like steps along the way


a beautiful thought, dear Hope!

In keeping positive things unfold more positively too ...

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-15 07:50 PM


I am agreeing with margherita too!

just saying

love the poem



ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
4 posted 2007-11-16 09:24 PM



Good one Hope, as usual

much enjoyed.

Lindsay

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