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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were in plain sight secret places eye to eye we were not looking just wearing the other's other with our heads under nothing ons I never did hear the ocean before not like the time there with you when you were leaning to my man tree with your woman willow side bending the rules with our hands but we had our love gloving on and I wanted your fingers more than their heart felt surrounding but then your legs moved their music and the sooth of their smooth reconciled prepossessing lingering repossession before I could visualize it was ever gone from tomorrow's dream shelved intimacy ___________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All of the lines melded but for some reason this line likes me... bending the rules with our hands Now, now you've made a good morning, D... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I never did hear the ocean before not like the time there with you" loved this D  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
A cup of coffee, a poem of yours to start my day and ... ... well, I just want to go back to bed. A |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
some days when I read you, I can do nothing but smile. Enjoyed, D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladies, you bless me with your eyes...thanks to each of you for the touch humbled at your reviews D |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I never did hear the ocean before not like the time there with you when you were leaning to my man tree with your woman willow side Here comes the emotion in motion ... your words have the power of transforming into music ... it's like holding a seashell to the ear ... Beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Such a pleasure to read again. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend _________ ms az, thanks babe for the return |
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