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Dove In The Sky (Remembrance Day)
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Dove In The Sky (Remembrance Day) |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 Dove In the Sky (Remembrance Day) A dove in the sky Flies over the war lands, Where the soldiers who died And are now in God’s hands. We remember who fought In the First World War, Who now are a part Of our nation’s true lore. Families were sad For the love they had lost, For the soldiers who fought And the lives that war cost. The red poppies are planted Between crosses in a row, Where lie soldiers and friends Who died a long time ago. A dove in the sky Flies over the war lands, Where the soldiers who died And are now in Gods hands ARCTIC WIND |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for this, as we enter the anniversary of the Marine Corp, and honor Veterans Day, side by side of one another. Some people may throw stones at glass houses; some may see only greener grass on another side; some may only have half-filled glasses... me? I still think that the USA is one of the better places to hang my head in prayer. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Obviously a pleasant and timely 'write' and tribute to those who assuredly deserve it most! P.S. I am so VERY glad when someone chooses to limit photo and graphic images to something small, tactful, and in fine 'good taste!' serious applause!! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you for this, Artic Wind (I love your nom de plume). Thank you for caring and for the beautiful imagery. I especially enjoyed the repeat of the first stanza at the end, encapsulating the completeness and finality of the lives lost. - Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Heartfelt and touching, dear Arctic Wind. Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
sunshine- thank so much! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
secondhandDreampoet- why thank you it is a honour ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
owlSA- your welcome lol happy you enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
dear margherita- i am so glad you enjoyed remembrance day is soon ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a touching Remembrance Day poem! It is truly beautiful and highly poetic! Love, Harmony, & World Peace, EA  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ea thank you so much, we all should remember what they did for everyone ARCTIC WIND |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Arctic.. a beautiful tribute to those who were courageous and loyal for their country.. we will remember them.. thank you RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
RDB- thank you so much again! your a good friend, and i am so happy that other people do remember thoose who fought for us ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
JamesMichael- thank so much, i really enjoyed writting this poem ARCTIC WIND |
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