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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-11-08 03:52 AM


The Real Thing Baby

I miss her.
She misses me too.
I want to hug her.
She wants a hug too.
I want to kiss her.
She's wanting a kiss too.

But what can we do?

We can't drop everything and run
into each others arms to share a
hug and a kiss, even though we know
it would work wonders to erase our miss.

If only at this moment it was possible...

Its a long ways
from Honolulu to Chicago.

So we call and email.
Send pictures and text message.
Still there's nothing like
the real thing baby.

JamesLee
07November
2007

  

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-11-08 05:04 AM


yes James, nothin like the real thing baby! I hear you gorgeous boy..hope all is well xx RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2007-11-08 05:15 AM


In comparison to former times, I think there is a fantastic evolution, but you are so right, nothing like the real thing.

Lovely.

Love,
Margherita

illusiveangel
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since 2007-10-22
Posts 72
Liverpool, UK
3 posted 2007-11-08 12:59 PM


Hi james,
Oh I did like this piece. I have the same thing going on right now and could relate so well.

Your words light yet conveying such meaning and the last line, really made me smile.

Well done,

Illusive x

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2007-11-09 08:21 AM


Thank you Roniece, Margherita and illusive angel for the wonderful responses...
Nothing quite as nice as face to face...James

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