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PrestonThePoet
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0 posted 2007-11-07 01:13 AM


Looking to the stars for guidance,
The aura of my existence in absence.
I want to breathe, to feel.
To make my world be surreal,
Existence surrounds me with imprision.
It’s my life, my decision.
Fire tingles within my forehead,
I envision me, laying on my deathbed.
I want the recollection to disappear,
Yet the epiphany seemed so clear.
My pulse drifts back into a constant beat,
The delusion is complete.


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Margherita
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1 posted 2007-11-07 05:05 PM


I can relate to this to a certain extent. I think this is a very very beautiful write.

Love,
Margherita

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