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Open Poetry #41

Season's Reasoning

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2007-11-06 12:51 PM

Season's Reasoning

It's that time of year
For the old to rest
And the young to shed old ways
As do trees shake off aging leaves
To the final embrace of comforting winds
Blown from the lips of God
Exhaling the breath of a million souls
Who deeply inhale
Fall's autumn memories
And beauties slow decline.

Marcel

Brian23
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 73
Belfast, Ireland

1 posted 2007-11-06 12:59 PM

That was a real nice poem and I enjoyed it a lot. I enjoy writing about the seasons and Autumn being my favorite of them. This poem gave me the inspiration to write another autumn poem.
Cheers

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-11-06 04:54 PM

Lovely thoughts and imagery.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-11-06 05:06 PM

Enjoyed...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2007-11-07 09:36 PM

You paint words in an artists brush, Keith.
Beautiful imagery, wonderful message.
Nice to read you again.

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