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To Be Cast
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To Be Cast |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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To Be Cast And the rains come, finally, to wash away some of the grime of life. Listening to the uneven tapping on the windows, as the breeze joins in to help silence the noise of memory. A meaningful tune hides somewhere beneath the weight of the past. "The death of innocence" a reality waiting for the next life to be cast. I hear those songs too often, while the ride to wherever takes me to the next moment. Listening, the uneven drops trace the cheeks before evaporating into silence. While... A meaningful tune hides somewhere, beneath the weight of the past. "The death of innocence" a reality waiting for the next life to be cast. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Obviously a very personal, 'real' and effectively emotive 'write!' I am especially fond of: "A meaningful tune hides somewhere, beneath the weight of the past. "The death of innocence" a reality waiting for the next life to be cast(!)" AND: about the rain... "Listening to the uneven tapping on the windows, as the breeze joins in to help silence the noise of memory." v. serious and sustained applause!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautifully written, dear Maureen. You touch the heart. When we consider that our cells renew continuously, we should allow also the "weight of memories" to lessen its pressure upon our hearts and minds. We would be able to breathe more easily and to face a new life, unburdened, now. I know it is not easy. Just a thought. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
"as the breeze joins in to help silence the noise of memory" uhhuh a good thing, that breeze |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You just get better and better and better and .... well, you know .... Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Well written and touching. Nakdthoughts. Ida |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
so beautifully true |
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