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Brian23
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since 2007-11-03
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Belfast, Ireland

0 posted 2007-11-05 01:36 AM



Indeed the wind does whistle tonight
Look at that wondrous inspirational sight
Embrace the rain and the cold
And let it strengthen you as I was once told
The sea is not our enemy but our friend
Its were our ancestors did ascend
Ask some questions and listen out for replies
Some will fall out of the grey turbulent skies
Stand against the salty sea spray and don’t despair
There is no use in this world for idle idiotic prayer
We will wait for the sun to greet us in the east
Until then we will ride the belly of the beast

© Copyright 2007 Brian Rooney - All Rights Reserved
Bronzeage
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since 2007-07-20
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1 posted 2007-11-05 07:14 PM


Very nice piece. Welcome to Pip.
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-11-05 07:21 PM


I love the "sea at night" and the following lines illustrate why!  

"Indeed the wind does whistle tonight
Look at that wondrous inspirational sight
Embrace the rain and the cold
And let it strengthen you as I was once told."


EA


JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-11-06 05:05 PM


Enjoyed...James
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