Open Poetry #41 |
My Shooting Star |
Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
*My Shooting Star* Shining, shining, a shooting star flies by, As it passes, a soft yellow light streaks the sky. Glowing, glowing, it twinkles so bright, As it shoots across the wide skies tonight. I wish upon you, to grant me my dream, To make it come true, light me up with your beam. Closing my eyes, I am drifting away, Bathed in your starlight, my night is now day. Flying, flying, with my shooting star, Holding on to its tail, flying around far. Dreaming, dreaming -- I must be asleep, And in a midnight dream, so very deep. ARCTIC WIND [This message has been edited by Artic Wind (11-05-2007 04:32 PM).] |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Lovely poem Arctic Wind you wrote it well Lindsay |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
That was sweet, who wouldn't want to hold on tight to the tail of a wee shooting star. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Arctic Wind, I can picture you swinging from that shooting star! I can see you growing as a poet even in the short time you have been a part of our circle of kindred poetic spirits! May all your dreams come true! Love & Star Light, EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ea thank you so much ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
LindsayP thank you you are a good friend ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
moondogz- take from your name, i think you like moons lol thank you ARCTIC WIND |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
nice writing artic wind ! In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
wolf Thank you Wolf ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Are you sure it was all a dream!?! Love & Shooting Star Light, EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ea- and i thought this star ran out of light thank you ARCTIC WIND |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Do the words twinkle twinkle mean anything? I think we all do this occasionally, why not? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Artic Wind....I wish it was possible to see the stars from the city in such a way. Perhps I'll dream some. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Arctic Wind This is lovely. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very very lovely, dear Arctic Wind. I adore spotting shooting stars (mostly on summernights in some places without artificial light pollution ...). Dream on! Love, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I'm a star watcher, too. When I was young, my Father used to take us out and we would all lay on our backs and watch the shower of meterorites every time we knew they were expected. It is one of my best memories. Your poem is transcendent. *smiles*....jo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Magnus- thank you! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Martie- so am i, i love to watch shooting stars, me and my friend years ago, use to lay a sheet down on her lawn, and watch for shooting stars, and count points for who spotted it first. good times ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Aziza- thank you so much ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita- thank you so much dear friend ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Illana - thank you, I use to do that with my best friend, but than she moved along time ago! ARCTIC WIND |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
great writing! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Fromme2u- Well well well< why thank you, I am guessing that you just joined, well i know! lol thank you, and welcome ARCTIC WIND |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I enjoying watching the stars, myself. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Smart Chick- WOW, thank you again ARCTIC WIND |
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