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Brian23
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since 2007-11-03
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Belfast, Ireland

0 posted 2007-11-04 07:49 AM



Last night I wished the moon to freeze
Dreamed that your soft laughter could resonate forever
For time to get tangled and lost.

Alas the sun chased away the moon
Burnt a hole through my tender heart
Drove a wedge that caused us to part
I love you so.

© Copyright 2007 Brian Rooney - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-11-04 03:15 PM


This aches, Brian. Your despair is palpable.

~ and that title! Perfect!

May the moon and stars shine on your nights from here on in.


Linda

moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
Posts 397
Great White North
2 posted 2007-11-04 09:44 PM


Man, your poems give me a lump in my throat.
That was very powerful...thanks

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