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Open Poetry #41

The night that night died

Brian23
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since 2007-11-03

Posts 73
Belfast, Ireland

0 posted 2007-11-04 07:49 AM

Last night I wished the moon to freeze
Dreamed that your soft laughter could resonate forever
For time to get tangled and lost.

Alas the sun chased away the moon
Burnt a hole through my tender heart
Drove a wedge that caused us to part
I love you so.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-11-04 03:15 PM

This aches, Brian. Your despair is palpable.

~ and that title! Perfect!

May the moon and stars shine on your nights from here on in.

Linda

moondogz
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since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

2 posted 2007-11-04 09:44 PM

Man, your poems give me a lump in my throat.
That was very powerful...thanks

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