Open Poetry #41 |
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Insight to murder |
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Brian23 Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 73Belfast, Ireland |
The sombre light cuts at his rickety eyes Sputtering and spewing he helplessly cries Cold granite caresses him absently now Soon will come the final utterance and vow Here comes the black dove down from its perch Finished is one life and its eternal search Has this given me an unique insight to life? No. |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
You say no....but maybe it has. Interesting poem...I quite like your work. |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
a dark but meaningful piece. |
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