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Brian23
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since 2007-11-03
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Belfast, Ireland

0 posted 2007-11-04 06:36 AM



The sombre light cuts at his rickety eyes
Sputtering and spewing he helplessly cries
Cold granite caresses him absently now
Soon will come the final utterance and vow

Here comes the black dove down from its perch
Finished is one life and its eternal search
Has this given me an unique insight to life?
No.

© Copyright 2007 Brian Rooney - All Rights Reserved
moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
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Great White North
1 posted 2007-11-04 09:47 PM


You say no....but maybe it has. Interesting poem...I quite like your work.
marcel
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since 2003-03-02
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az, usa
2 posted 2007-11-06 12:40 PM


a dark but meaningful piece.
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