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Open Poetry #41

Meaning No Harm

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-07-23 09:36 PM

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Time
Shadows all

Flowers
Two lovers
On the shore

However much
They wish
It wasn’t so

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Hyaunt
Member

since 2007-07-12

Posts 74

1 posted 2007-07-24 01:14 PM

Should I read like

However much
They wish "Meaning No Harm "
It wasn’t so

Simple petals
of delicate flower
in the rain of memory
ah, lift thee up,
you time clouds
you are dropping all the pain!!

[This message has been edited by Hyaunt (07-24-2007 04:27 PM).]

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

2 posted 2007-07-24 08:07 PM

Lovely words, enjoyed.

Rick

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2007-07-24 08:14 PM

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Thank you both.

Women deny time.
For them
there is always tomorrow

Men, I think,
are different.

Thanks again.

John

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Hyaunt
Member

since 2007-07-12

Posts 74

4 posted 2007-07-24 08:30 PM

How interesting! A nice romantic poem
evolved into a serious philosophy. It is nice to read your words though.

Do you mean that for men, there was always yesterday? I agree.

BBGrrl
Member

since 2007-07-17

Posts 181
BC, Canada

5 posted 2007-07-24 09:57 PM

I feel this - it aches to me.

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