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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2007-11-01 02:43 PM


‘tis the silence of the angry
that shatters window panes
and breaks up the fragile
thought safely buried in
the strength of a woman.

But angry vibes like road works
forerunners to creation  
of many different ways
to reach the mountain peak
of ecstasy and peace.

All roads lead to heaven;
oh, lahdie, dah, die, dah,
‘tis slow the manner, means,
of breaking down the known
and laying a bright and shiny path
to where I want to be.

And within a thousand dreams
love whispers many things
but keeps me building roads
to the silently insidious
beat of angry vibes!

Helen / 1 November 2007 www.dreamtimepoetry.com


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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
1 posted 2007-11-01 03:01 PM


Unsettling ... and maybe not all roads lead there?

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2007-11-01 03:03 PM


"‘tis the silence of the angry
that shatters window panes
and breaks up the fragile
thought safely buried in
the strength of a woman."

A lot said in this stanza.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-11-01 03:16 PM


Hurt, pain, anger, forgiveness...and so forth...James
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2007-11-01 03:32 PM


... thinking ...

quote:
And within a thousand dreams
love whispers many things
but keeps me building roads
to the silently insidious
beat of angry vibes!



I agree, dear Helen, that Love whispers many things, but I think it's the non complete awareness of Love's power that keeps you building roads to the silently insidious beat of angry vibes!

Angry vibes are frequently perceived no doubt and we need to acknowledge them; the healing begins by embracing them and by transforming them into love vibes.

Again you have offered us a deep and self-analyzing write, that is thought provoking.

So well done!


love and hugs.
Margherita

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