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Open Poetry #41

Gray’s Anatomy

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-11-01 02:16 PM

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All the colors
Seem to glow
In the cold
November air

The first
Of the month
As yet no snow
And the open sky
Is blue

Being things now
Aren’t how or where
They used to be
One tends to dwell
On nature more
Than man

The golden
Amber hue
On the autumn
Maple boughs

A slender willow
Coyly supple
In the afternoon

Limbs swaying
With the wind

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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

1 posted 2007-11-01 02:46 PM

"One tends to dwell
On nature more
Than man"

And a very good thing to do! Enjoyed your words!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-11-01 04:26 PM

Delightful! We actually NEED to "dwell on Nature", if we neglect it, it could be fatal to MEN.

I love your awareness.

Margherita

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

3 posted 2007-11-01 07:47 PM

very beautiful. Love the ending.
beautiful!!!!

Tomtoo

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