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lyricpoet
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0 posted 2007-10-31 08:22 PM


My just love, from the decree of her moist lips I have never departed. Her smile laid rich that abides in it's path of innocents. Of light exists day by day which discourse to meet her starry eyes. Where her silken tresses, so fair, waves like an ebony veil against her bosom. And that tender light that shines upon her face is heavens concern. To pass the night in this loftly nest, so deep in mind and sweet embrace.

O' my soul pines for her love, so dear, in double hearts. So soft in glow, that it tints her cheek with a rosey hue. In her aspect of youthfulness, and the tenting state of her grace. Her shades of effulgence turn a kiss that will never be undefined. She will kept, preserves me and I will never restrain my passions. There is no secret to our love, but expressed the more from within my heart.

(c) Kevin Brian Wright 2007

Author Kevin Brian Wright 2007

© Copyright 2007 Kevin Brian Wright - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2007-10-31 08:30 PM


Your love may be "just", but it is not just love ~ nor is this just poetry! ~ That depth of love and loving, is far more than that ~ and you expressed that so beautifully.


EA
P.S. I don't recall seeing your photo before. It is nice to see your handsome, smiling face! ~ The face of a man in love!


lyricpoet
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2 posted 2007-11-01 12:51 PM


Thank you for reading and for your kind words. It is much appreciated.

Author Kevin Brian Wright 2007

Margherita
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3 posted 2007-11-01 04:50 AM


quote:
Where her silken tresses, so fair, wave like an ebony veil against her bosom. And that tender light that shines upon her face is heaven's concern.


Beautiful imagery!

Love,
Margherita

lyricpoet
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4 posted 2007-11-01 06:24 AM


Many thanks for your thoughts.

W.

Author Kevin Brian Wright 2007

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-11-04 04:32 AM


A pleasure to read...James
lyricpoet
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6 posted 2007-11-04 07:18 PM


Thank you James
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