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Imaginery Conversation with a "Bad Boy"
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Imaginery Conversation with a "Bad Boy" |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Teacher: “What are you saying as you carve your words? What legacy do you leave behind? A tree is spent, a mind is bent Spending on a bleeding ‘me’.” Student: “Check me out after I deface, I’m the “It” and “All” My imprint I have left you As a powered, reminding call. Stare at me, if you will, I am the mighty Id! Now, as an intensely steaming pot, Rain falls from my lid.” Teacher: “From where have you come, all mighty Id? You’re just a small boy in red, From what forest have you been driven, On what roads will you be led?” Student: “Nowhere will I be led For I AM the ‘concrete’ street! Love is just a farce you see; Who REALLY cares for me? Everyone tends to dread me, sympathize or weep; Unbridled have I run unsupervised on a street.” Teacher: The etching of his echo grinds on wooden desk, What legacy will he leave? What really is he quest? ~misce~ (Note: Being an educator is usually the most rewarding job I can imagine, but there are days... This is an attempt for me to better understand a little situation I encountered today. ("Grrrrrr..... Kids. You just gotta luv 'em! Right?" ) [This message has been edited by miscellanea (10-30-2007 10:14 PM).] |
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illusiveangel Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 72Liverpool, UK |
What an incedibly interesting piece yet at the same time, this just cried out in sadness of this boy who is left to his own devices within a 'concrete street'. So true of many children these days and tough on both pupil and student. However, very cleverly written! illusive x |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
This was a very atypical day for me. Usually, the kids are pretty upbeat and happy in my class. As you might guess from my writing, I am a bit bothered by his attitude, but writing helps me sort it out... Thanks for your feedback, illusive. I'm glad you found it interesting,although sad. Like I said, most of the kids I see in school seem to be pretty happy. Yea! miscellanea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hmmmmm....let me guess. He's at it again. Gosh, that didn't last very long. Miss you already, MisC. *hugs*....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As you may know, my eldest daughter is an educator as well, and there are those days when she swears some of the children have come from another planet. She thinks their hormones rule their heads at that age. lol I am going to show her your poem ~ and there's no doubt that she will be commiserating with you and nodding. Your poems are always very interesting to read!  Love to you, Linda |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Misc, As you already know these are the moments that set teachers apart. These are the opportunities that may change lives. These are the times when those who don't teach drop their jaw in awe of those who do. You can't "save" everybody but that's only because everybody has a choice. God bless our teachers and God bless you.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Misc, I think it's truly admirable that you would try to get to the core of this problematic event with this boy. There is sensitivity in this, intelligence, will to help and more. My compliments for your reaction and for this conversation. Children nowadays receive so many media inputs, that they risk to imitate what they hear and see, losing the touch with reality. And then if we add the familiar circumstances ... it becomes even more complex. I truly admire you and all teachers who have the ability to give so much, even when they are challenged in such ways everyday. Thank you my dear. Love, Margherita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Earth Angel, I'm flattered you'd show this to your daughter. As to another planet or raging hormones, I'd probably agree at times. Yesterday, I think it was the anticipation of Halloween candy for most. Yummy! I hope they saved some for me! Thanks for taking the time to respond! Hugs, misce' misce |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
iliana, Today was much better! It's amazing the difference one day can make. Maybe the kids were just worn out from all the trick-or-treating last night! I'm still going to watch out for the sugar high tomorrow! Guess what I'm doing tonight? New seating charts!!!! I so enjoyed our visit! We'll have to get together sooner next time. Thanks for commenting. I always love hearing from you. luv, lil Sis |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Larry, You're such a wise old owl (well, maybe not so old)! "These are the opportunities that may change lives." This, coupled with following should be framed and placed on every teacher's desk: "You can't "save" everybody but that's only because everybody has a choice." Have a good day, week, month, season, and the list goes on! It was good to hear from you again, Larry. Thanks, misce' |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Margherita, You are so kind in your comments... I've nearly 650 students each week. I wish I was more perceptive, but it seems I barely initiate an activity before they're called to leave, let alone, to have enough time to interact more. I love what I'm doing, but wish I could see them more often. Hm...maybe I should wish upon a star! It has been so nice to hear from you. I hope this finds you well. misce' |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
James, I'm glad you found it interesting. Thanks for your feedback. misce' |
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