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Do you still want me to turn back the clock
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Do you still want me to turn back the clock |
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SittingBull New Member
since 2007-10-30
Posts 2Singapore |
Is this for real Asking me out for a meal All these while, fun and innocent Now walks under the brightly illuminated crescent Heartbeats, crickets, our softly planted footsteps Rows of streetlamps, our cuddles with wine and food How we enjoy, immersed in romantic mood Time seems to freeze Each time on our favourite bench, amidst the cool night breeze Our own world, nobody but us At times, so vulnerable when engulfed by lust Clearer minds prevail, and we always stay true to the values that define us, uniquely me and you My Dear, what if, If i could turn back time and change my past Would i end up missing you My Dear, what if, If i stay the way it is Would our love stay strong and last I had never love you any less Regardless of past memories that created this mess I'm not sure if i'm to be blamed but it hurts being helpless as i watch you in pain I wish it was me taking it all cuts, broken hearts and the fall Silly thoughts and cruel games our minds play Just ask yourself who you want sleeping beside everyday That says it all really Our minds may stray and imagination may run wild but our hearts says the truth despite it all and through the rough sea, our love stand tall Do you still want me to turn back the clock I have waited so long all my life to find somebody i truly love and cherish When you came, past memories start to fade and together new memories of us are made Out the old and in the new Sweet beautiful memories of us are not a few Surely you know, that my life is about nobody but you Till today, i still thank God that it would be you and i, soon husband and wife with me loving you with all my life My Dear, do you still want me to turn back the clock cos if you do, i will try till the day my tears dry |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Sitting Bull! Welcome to our passionate circle of kindred spirits!  "I have waited so long all my life to find somebody i truly love and cherish When you came, past memories start to fade and together new memories of us are made" ~ So sweet, pure and earnest. Let the new memories begin! Sending much happiness your way! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Pips. Thank you sharing such a passionate poem! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to the blue pages  |
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SittingBull New Member
since 2007-10-30
Posts 2Singapore |
Hope to receive some guidance from you guys.. i'm pretty new to poetry, and basically i'm not sure if there's hard and fast rules to correct writing. Pardon me if so cos i just thought i put my recent ambivalence into writing as a form of therapy.. |
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rugged_miss Junior Member
since 2007-10-27
Posts 26 |
WOW u found the one! may it last forever! welcome.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...new experiences make new memories...James |
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