Open Poetry #41 |
Your Truth or Mine? |
WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Everyone sees and experiences life through a personal life-filter a personal, inviolable thought process that endlessly creates personal truth that cannot be gainsaid. Everyone else will always see the world uniquely differently than I do so must I bend my thoughts, to perceive the heartbeat of another's story upon the Earth – a story every bit as true as the one I tell myself each moment though expressed in different words. The ugliness or the beauty; how they see in the world will always challenge my truth. But how can such be judged? What criteria can be used to determine the right or wrong of it? None. There is no right or wrong outside of judgment. I can do more than listen to another’s inner journey as it is experienced: I can allow them to use their gift, their piece of life, in any way they choose. If it is destructive (to me) I’m sure that compassion has already taken that into consideration – I can rely on compassion, a much safer tool than condemnation. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am particularly fond of the ending!: "I can do more than listen to another’s inner journey as it is experienced: I can allow them to use their gift, their piece of life, in any way they choose. If it is destructive (to me) I’m sure that compassion has already taken that into consideration – I can rely on compassion, a much safer tool than condemnation." I find that most American folk these days do not really even want to 'truly' listen to other people's 'stories' (let alone "do more than listen")...they just want an 'audience' for their own 'story'! Applause!! |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
What then is truth...but simply what we believe it to be. Excellent thought provoking poem. Thank you, INclan |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I am in total agreement with poet and the ending blows me away... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Love is always the answer! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
A pause for thought and a deep breath; a second read and a calm smile. Thank you for a wonderful way to start my day. MoonShadow . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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