Open Poetry #41 |
![]() ![]() |
The Waitenance of A White Fairy |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Kalle Member
since 2007-10-15
Posts 89Finland |
It is almost November. Dark. No Snow. It is hard to exercise. Limbs Ache. The Sacred Boredom stretches from the corner of Semi-Wintry Clouds. The semblance of activity, hurried words in the cold. I Met a friend during these masked Weeks. I tried to Ignore Him, but the circumstances brought it to a stage where it would have been too obvious. I said a few words, he, some, we parted and Only Now I remembered his Time-Machine Face. It was not clear. Even now it keeps in the Dark. My guest held his foot in the Door-chink. His name was A faceless Terror of Quiet and Lonely Winter Days. Reading Carver, Through the Window No footsteps in the Snow. |
||
© Copyright 2007 Kalle Kaunisto - All Rights Reserved | |||
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love when the last line sums up the poem: "No footsteps in the Snow. Nodding. I confess, I'm prolly not well-versed enough in your culture and mythology to understand this is all of its intent (um, why some phrases are capitalized are prolly due to my own ignorance Kellie, so, that's my problem.) But I love a last sentence punch. line. ![]() thanks for sharing ![]() |
||
Kalle Member
since 2007-10-15
Posts 89Finland |
Capitalization (of words) is a means to Emphasizesation |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |