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Earths, the river...
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Earths, the River... A river ran through us Long before we were born It cut the darken land And we were divided Long before we were born The earth reminded us The river left a scar Between two worlds: our worlds Long before we were born I was the enemy So I promised myself I would take this soil And build a bridge for you If the river would flood I'll resist the current I want you to trust me -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thougts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos [This message has been edited by Juju (11-15-2007 10:55 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I want you to trust me." Enjoyed...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So I promised myself I would take this soil And build a bridge for you If the river would flood I'll resist the current I want you to trust me Loved your imagery and the bridge makes for a great symbol. Very beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Juju- I have to agree with margherita ! lovely juju, i really enjoy your poems, when i read them, cant wait till your next one ARCTIC WIND |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
A great piece of poetry. This is the first of yours i've read........so far |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thankyou for all of your comments!!! here is a link of the video of the poem. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISyNASNqgpw -Juju -Juju |
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