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Open Poetry #41
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Shadow_Singer
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 51
0 posted 2007-10-25 07:40 AM

I should have sung a birthday song to you,
It would have been the thing to do,
But I can’t admit you’re aging a day;
It has been years and years you say.
I remember you as that girl in the meadow
When we didn’t even think of the morrow,
Just a few days have gone by you know
Not all those years and years you say;
I should have sung a birthday song to you.
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2007-10-25 08:03 AM

Sweet, the melody
Heard intrinsically inside
Affection replied
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-10-25 08:06 AM

Hello! Welcome to our circle of kindred spirits!

That was an especially sweet and tender birthday song ~ and you 'sang' it very well.

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2007-10-25 11:21 AM

Ahh the passing of time, very beautifully rendered in this piece, to the point of aching.

Love,
Margherita
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