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Open Poetry #41

The Master and the Maid

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

0 posted 2007-10-24 11:06 AM

The Master and the Maid

She seemed contrasted to the room
that with its rank on rank of books
walled itself as though a parapet.
As well,
the richly inlaid breadth of floor
geometrically assumed a shape
separate from the looks that curved
within the hush of polished distance.

RMW

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-10-24 01:35 PM

Very well done and intriguing.

Love,
Margherita

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

2 posted 2007-10-25 09:44 AM

Margherita .... thank you for taking a moment to comment. Kind regards ... Bob

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2007-10-25 12:11 PM

I felt this tickle my scalp as it went by...

but it did make me want to curl up in front of a fire and read something delicious.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

4 posted 2007-10-25 12:17 PM

Smiling. Thank you, Susan. Bob

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-10-27 02:17 PM

I have a maid...myself...James

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2007-10-27 02:49 PM

What a polished setting! Neat! I love this! to the library!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2007-10-30 05:55 PM

You always did have a way with words, guy

Shadow_Singer
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 51

8 posted 2007-10-30 06:01 PM

Seems to me that there needs to be a little more, not that I didn't like this, but because I did. How a bit of feather duster action?

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