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Open Poetry #41

As Imaginations Flow Free

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-10-22 12:36 PM

As Imaginations Flow Free

Dip into passionate palettes
Leaving excuses behind
Blend our thoughts together
Using your creative mind

Going places we want to be
In doing what we choose
Light paths with imagination
We have nothing to loose

Combine enchanting visions
Colouring while we think
Hands reaching out to touch
Flowing with a silvery ink

Travel upon magical dreams
Soaring flights of fantasy
Encounter heavenly shades
As imaginations flow free

Hope©2007
Poem with music and graphic at the Url below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91008514.html

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-10-22 02:49 PM

Dear Hope, I love your advice. This is beautiful in form and content. Enjoyed!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-10-22 03:41 PM

lovely, hope

ARCTIC WIND

illusiveangel
Member

since 2007-10-22

Posts 72
Liverpool, UK

3 posted 2007-10-23 05:05 AM

Hi hope!!

What an opening line,
'dip into passionate palettes'.

I always feel that like anything, we need to engage the reader from the first line or two and this worked excellently! A fanstastic read! Well done.

Illusive.x

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

4 posted 2007-10-23 11:53 PM

I always love reading your poems Hope

your rhyming and rhythm is always impeccable

thanks for sharing.

Lindsay

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