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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2007-10-20 11:03 PM



One By One


As I look out my front window
At the two great big old trees
The leaves are already falling
With colors there to see

One by one, they are dropping
As they slowly cover the ground
With a blanket of many colors
For all of us to see, now

When I walk out my front door
What a beautiful site to see
With all the pretty colors
Just waiting there for me

10-20-07




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1 posted 2007-10-21 09:06 AM


Well now, MsSuzieQ~
What a beautiful greet for my day~

Lovely hon ... just lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2007-10-21 09:56 AM


most certainly a 'colorful' write!

[nice idea...fine Autumn penning!]

applause!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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3 posted 2007-10-21 10:09 AM


they make
a pretty picture walk
beneath my feet,
their mother tree
mixed of multicolored blessings
watching their beauty fall off,
as they leave her,
she shudders, knowing
her arms of december
inevitably to be empty

HopeS
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4 posted 2007-10-21 11:49 AM


beautiful view , I love the rich colours of Autumn

Hope

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2007-10-21 12:02 PM


This is beautiful Sue!
Autumn is really the most colorful time of year.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn the year's last loveliest smile~

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2007-10-21 12:10 PM


Marge is always a wonderful source of inspiration ~ and in so many ways!

Sue, what a feast for the eyes! It is as though I have a colourful stand of trees in front of me in all their autumnal glory!

Kudos to you!

Happy autumnal hugs and love,

Linda

latearrival
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7 posted 2007-10-21 12:36 PM


I love this, you did them justice. I also have a yard full to rake and pile and turn into mulch.They serve so many  purposes from the beginning to the end. "Late"
Margherita
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8 posted 2007-10-22 04:22 AM


Very lovely rendering of autumn bliss, dear Sue!

Enjoyed this greatly.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

bnabors
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9 posted 2007-10-24 05:34 AM


Hi Sue
what a clever idea. I loved the poem.
love you
Bob


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