Open Poetry #41 |
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Of the Night |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Once I thought that I could write, an ode as pretty as the night, the first verse calm as vespertine, of night and day in intertwine before night gains the upper hand and shadows dance across the land. then to pen of Luna's rise, of Venus as she ope's her eyes and gazes down on earth below, ensconcing all in radiant glow, crescendoing to midnight's hour, when man and beast in darkness cower beneath Orion and his minions, standing guard of night's dominions, whil'st all the while the muses seven in beauty sing, notes fall from heaven, unto the earth, night's symphonies, upon the wings of evening's breeze. but alas, my pen was dry, as I gazed unto night's sky, for of the splendor of the night, mortal words are but a slight, aye, mortal words are but a slight, for the splendor of the night. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The only wrong within this write, sir, is that most don't gaze into the night; they hold fast onto some light, and wrong they are not into some dream pass into some winsome gleam; such as your own vespertine ~ but such as you and I might glimpse such dream and hang by hand onto such stream as liquid as the night time skies and stream a dream upon such sighs that liquid light becomes us so; then light would dream us, as its glow... a splendor then, the two of us... as outside our light, reality is thus... yes, my dear, I will dim the light, and come to you, this very night. ~*~ thank you...it has been a while since I've been so inspired! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tim, your pen, most assuredly, is filled with ink of the finest indigo. ~ May it never go "dry". ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very nice Tim. Ida |
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