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Fallen Whispers Of Simultaneity
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Fallen Whispers Of Simultaneity |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Golden Autumn words fall thoughtfully from your pensive poetic pen, dipped in rich earth-imagery (Walden Pond-like) embellishing a frigid night, then capturing warm light dancing through dawn's curtains to stretch a morning mind in magnificent splendor. Like gentle fallen whispers, each richly hued phrase caresses, soothes the restless questing spirits hovering anxiously overhead. Love is never dead... sometimes, it is simply sleeping, waiting awakening by the simultaneous fall of two hearts. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
when hearts collapse in unison perhas love will whiser somehow,yes |
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Kalle Member
since 2007-10-15
Posts 89Finland |
I doubt if true poetry falls pensively from truthful pen. Perhaps it pours "When he starts it jus pours out of him" But do leaves pour they don`t fall either they Float Swim, dance and (We need a new word for this copulation of once-green lungs and the dead leaves disintegrated ones "By Bacteria") If you invent it you`ll help me (and everyone who reads this) tremendously. If you give me that word I will not gongratulate you on your poetical skill (It doesn`t exist, anywhere, not even Goethe possessed it. Rather, I will shout the word, on a an autumnly Finnish hill and it will echo to Buddha and Christ I think they loved falling leaves... [This message has been edited by Kalle (10-19-2007 04:06 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
An especially pleasant ‘write’!: I am particularly fond of: “Golden Autumn words fall(ing) from (a) pensive poetic pen(!) dipped in rich-earth imagery”; “Like gentle fallen whispers, each richly hued phrase caresses, soothes the restless questing spirit”; And, the wonderful ending: “Love is never dead... sometimes, it is simply sleeping, waiting (to be awakened) by the fall… of (twin/'spirit-mate') hearts(!)” Serious applause for a fine poet with a rather unique style!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Love is never dead... sometimes, it is simply sleeping, waiting awakening by the simultaneous fall of two hearts. oh Kathleen, this is wonderful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Wonderful write and the ending just marvelous. Much enjoyed! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your last stanza was the perfect closing to this fine write. "Love is never dead... sometimes, it is simply sleeping, waiting awakening by the simultaneous fall of two hearts." ~Awww, that is so romantic.  Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: So deeply captivating, dear Kacy! Love, Margherita |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This write is metaphorically rich, as you paint lovely pictures with words. So you! I'll look at the falling leaves a little differently today... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I came back for another 'official read and comment' on this fine 'write'! It is indeed rather 'image rich' and 'captivating'! more sustained applause!! |
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illusiveangel Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 72Liverpool, UK |
Oh Midinite, I so loved the phrase about Dawns curtains. So beautifully penned. Illusive.x |
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nevermore93 Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 73 |
great poem, a great use of metaphor and symblism. I am a new person to the site, and this is my rfavorite poem so far. PS; i posted a poem in the open poetry forum #1, if you people could take the time to check it out it would be great. it's called "Seperated, yet never apart" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you each, for reading and taking a moment to reply! Each and every reply means much to me. Bruce,  thank you!!!! |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
WOW !! How'd I miss this one? It's wonderful! What a pleasure to read and re-read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Thank you ArtSolstice!!!! |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
beautifully penned! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Love is never dead... sometimes, it is simply sleeping," Yes! Lovely poem, Kacy! So good to some words from you this evening. ...jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Great to see you here, Jo! And Marcel, you too, what a treat! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely as always, Midnight. Ida |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
shines beauifully as always. enjoyed Tomtoo |
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