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Your Face Before Me..
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Your Face Before Me.. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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Thinking of you brings a smile I’m smiling now... I can see your face before me Looking at me with those *to-die-for* blue eyes Staring right into my soul Daring me to look at you In a way that’s not allowed For a taken woman on the right side of town One day though I’m going to stare you down… Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, now that is a bold romantic dare! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like you have plans...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Midnightsun & James... thanks for your comments..  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most interesting 'write'! applause!! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
LOL! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very pleased ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my gawd! I loved this sassy little write! Like another Aussie gal used to sing, "I am woman. Hear me roar!" lol Loving hug, Linda  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you everyone! I think it's the 'rebel' in me coming out! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: He surely can't wait! This was delightful. Love, Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Keep the smile on your face Roniece and one day you will be rewarded. Good luck. Lindsay |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Interesting Roniece I'm not real clear on the last couple of lines. I sense a different message. Is there a right & wrong side of town..? I like it though. Dale |
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