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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-10-18 08:45 PM

   Fall Wintering into Spring

Multicolored clouds…
dance across the fading face
  of sunset,
as a mystic-crystal moon
rises from this lake of mirrors,
fair jewel of Autumn’s
  melancholy reverie
on such an ever-fleeting world,
where nothing stands
but Time and wilderness…
the only true ‘temples’
that suffer no hidden meaning,
when Nature speaks
with the gentle wisdom of
  a breeze,
on the final leaf that falls
or the last wildflower.

Walk with the wind
through the empty hills
  of Winter,
wrapped in the flawless peace
of pensive mist and silent snow,
for then...may we meet
on a field of dreams…
in Love and eternal Spring!

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2007-10-18 09:29 PM

*sighs*

"Walk with the wind
through the empty hills
of Winter,
wrapped in the flawless peace
of pensive mist and silent snow,"

I look forward to this time of year so much...

as usual, I really enjoyed your write!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2007-10-19 05:31 AM

I haven't read a single one of your poems that I didn't like. This one is no exception.
Beautiful as always.
Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2007-10-19 06:06 AM

Walk with the wind
through the empty hills
of Winter,
wrapped in the flawless peace
of pensive mist and silent snow,
for then...may we meet
on a field of dreams…
in Love and eternal Spring!

my friend Bruce, you truly have a gift - a wonderful precious gift - thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Kalle
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since 2007-10-15

Posts 89
Finland

4 posted 2007-10-19 08:06 AM

The idea of Wintering and Falling, Springing and Summering is a good one...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2007-10-19 08:49 AM

Bruce~
This ... this is pure poetic beauty~

'Walk with the wind' ... and THIS
is inspirational-ink waiting for me to dip my quill into~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~
~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

6 posted 2007-10-19 09:30 AM

this begs to be hand-printed on finest parchment, and framed...

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

7 posted 2007-10-19 11:44 AM

liked it

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

8 posted 2007-10-20 08:29 PM

You've captured the transitions of the seasons beautifully with these images and colors.

Especially enjoyed -

"fair jewel of Autumn’s
melancholy reverie
on such an ever-fleeting world,
where nothing stands
but Time and wilderness…
the only true ‘temples’ "
that suffer no hidden meaning,
when Nature speaks
with the gentle wisdom of
a breeze,
on the final leaf that falls
or the last wildflower."

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2007-10-20 08:31 PM

What a poetic write! I can see where your inspiration led Marge. It is inspirational enough for anyone.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

10 posted 2007-10-20 09:43 PM

Marge is truly one who knows how to "walk with the wind" (in the very deepest poetic and philosophic sense of the phrase)!

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