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Open Poetry #41

Absract Abysm

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-10-17 05:33 PM

Please take this emptiness
this invasion of soul
and these shadows

that dance upon the walls
where moonlight lies

the edge of night

denies me rest.
The screams seem to be
like a banshees wail

falling upon deaf ears
as icy fingertips dig in
gripping deeply

clinging to heart

and the shiver,  shakes me

       hard

is this harsh reality

now come the cold
     of winters chill.

"In yearning for nothing, you will be free to enjoy what you do, free to see the patterns, free to hear the music in all things."
-Barbara Ann Kipfer

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-10-17 05:36 PM

Nice poem

ARCTIC WIND

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2007-10-17 05:49 PM

enjoyed

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2007-10-17 05:52 PM

Artic, thank you.

Vandana, thanks sweetie, hope you are doing well. Hugs.

Xillus_Xavier
Member

since 2007-10-05

Posts 72
Alabama

4 posted 2007-10-17 09:48 PM

Well structured.
Well written.
Nothing negative about it in my mind.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2007-10-18 07:05 AM

Donna... this is beautiful! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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