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When Time Finds Love
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When Time Finds Love |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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When Time Finds Love Difference is the key, one could say though difference finds kind and kind finds keys then keys unlock doors, or hearts some say; it is that then, time, when, then we live, and thrive in some passionate express that belies embodied difference, and keys, sans doors transport us beyond our cries, and we lay well…in us. For it is when time finds love, that whimsical dreams reappear night after night, in forms varied and not so always kindly, but mindlessly finds yet another key, perhaps a mean, once again to unlock a door, or ere allow a peer within a window when within all of that some heart wins out, that rekindled moment when some thump against a chest is felt against a breast and sometimes, even under some wayward sun, some two win, as one when time finds love. 10 Oct. 2007 |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Very nice write here! An interesting concept. I liked the twisting little melody you wrote and the way it ended. Yuo definately are very skilled and much enjoyed. This one is going in my library Peace Rich |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Much enjoyed, Karilea. "When time finds love" - lovely! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ah, yes! "that rekindled moment" when time stands still.  Lovely penning, Karilea Sun Light.  Linda |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...It must be then, that when time finds love, love finds time. Lovely thoughts and words here. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Sunshine, I second all the above remarks, A great poem. Lindsay |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"some two win, as one when time finds love." A beauty!! JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh this is lovely! 'when time finds love'... I like these words.. thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem with us... RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that rekindled moment when some thump against a chest is felt against a breast and sometimes, even under lovely writing , Karilea M |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
always a pleasure reading your kind words,glad i stopped by~ My spirit will rise |
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Mike Montana New Member
since 2007-10-17
Posts 8Maryland |
This poem is unique and it has depth to it which put it in it's own class away from the other poems. I really enjoy reading this poem. |
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Kalle Member
since 2007-10-15
Posts 89Finland |
I could use a hint of the meaning of expression for "Time finding love" Is it the essence of time being separeted, as gathered into the spectrumlense of history as machine that this forwardmotion is estranged from love and that in stopping to notice the love this perceivance of time finds the nature of love? |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"For it is when time finds love, that whimsical dreams reappear night after night, in forms varied and not so always kindly, but mindlessly finds yet another key, perhaps a mean, once again to unlock a door, or ere allow a peer within a window"  I love this so much...perfection! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
And it does sometimes....time does find it, for a few precious moments. Sometimes they have to last a lifetime, but those moments do come. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Interesting ‘write’! I am particularly fond of: “we lay well…in us(!)”; “…under some wayward sun”; “ when … some heart wins out”; “when time finds love(!); Applause! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and keys, sans doors transport us beyond our cries, and we lay well…in us." such exceptional work Karilea |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: wow, dear Karilea, this is a wonderful poem. I love the serene flow of it, the tune of your heart that plays through the words. Everything, just beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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illusiveangel Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 72Liverpool, UK |
Oh I got totally 'lost' in this piece, really. So engaging and the words so very beautiful. Illusive.x |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Karilea. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and sometimes, even under some wayward sun, some two win, as one when time finds love. And those days are worth all the others that must simply be endured. *S* |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
i really enjoyed this one sunshine ARCTIC WIND |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sun, you could be so many passionate things as waves danced over heels and fingers twirled effortlessly at the water's edge... and a dream, once again remembered in slumber allows time to be well spent. |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
oh this almost makes me believe that there is such a thing as magical moments...sigh |
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