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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-10-17 06:07 AM

It flows delicately
strumming smoothly
vibrations fluttering

eyelids close in half dream state
this feeling, how it reverberates,
white water rapids
ripple over this drift of souls

lost in the slowing currents
that merge into the calm
where breathless,

we lie resting upon the shores
in quiet ebb of tide.

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Kalle
Member

since 2007-10-15

Posts 89
Finland

1 posted 2007-10-17 06:17 AM

It holds together it`s inner structure

though at bottom i seem to sense this sort of feeling

that takes hold of you when you drop a pebble into a deep well

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2007-10-17 09:55 AM

a beauty this is!!

very much enjoyed it

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-10-18 03:19 PM

"white water rapids
ripple over this drift of souls"

beautiful feel to this gentle Donna

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2007-10-19 12:59 PM

Beautiful as usual, Gentle Spirit.
Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2007-10-20 04:12 AM

absolutely lovely! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2007-10-20 04:43 AM

"we lie resting upon the shores
in quiet ebb of tide."

Donna, sounds good to me! Love it!

Linda

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2007-10-20 08:56 AM

hey Donna...how you doin'?

My shore holds just me and this time, I like it that way...

very beautiful images..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2007-10-20 10:51 PM

sounds magical
swept in the tides
of dream

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2007-10-20 11:30 PM

Beautiful!

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

10 posted 2007-10-21 03:01 PM

I like it, I identified

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