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Open Poetry #41

fiery nirvana

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2007-07-22 06:55 PM

She was lost
Amongst my thoughts
Where her walks
Near the pier

Were like dances
That shamed those that
Walked through
The fire that stained

The steps that she etched
Into every mile
That faced her skin
Towards the sea
Of people that stood

In amazement with their jaws
Like spoons of silver
Channeling their awe
Into her legs that begged
The ground to move
The way she stood
As the river took notice
Running down the canary’s forest.

I remember what it was like
To touch her,

As if I could be with my lies
Entrenched between my toes

Feeling a narrow wave
That sauntered from her neck
To the delicacy of her cheeks
That invited crimson red

To sit next to my bodies window,
As if I were a woodsman
With my arms taking
Her side and hoping
Her hints become whispers
To the insides of my
Caves long, lost, thoughts.

[This message has been edited by Tomer (07-22-2007 09:08 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-07-22 09:10 PM

wow! that last verse really was the icing on the cake!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2007-07-23 12:23 PM

"She was lost
Amongst my thoughts"

excellent work Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2007-07-23 02:02 PM

Thanks Passing and Lady, happy you enjoyed.

Tomer

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