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The_Nameless_One
Member

since 2007-01-20

Posts 165
Missouri

0 posted 2007-10-16 09:43 PM

my unborn cousin died
soul and heart divide
shattered into oblivion

agony and despair
mind lost in care
sobbing so many tears

earth shattering pain
deep inside membrane
soul sucking depression

why did this happen

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-10-16 09:59 PM

How sad!

i really feel for the problem

ARCTIC WIND

The_Nameless_One
Member

since 2007-01-20

Posts 165
Missouri

2 posted 2007-10-16 10:03 PM

thank you for the concern its really tough right now

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2007-10-16 10:28 PM

I'm very sorry to hear your sad news

Nameless One, but your sad verse was written with a lot of feeling. My sincere sympathy.

Lindsay

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-10-16 11:17 PM

Your pen appears to have been dipped into an inkwell of tears. The resultant tears then slid down the page ~ joined by my own. I am truly saddened by your family's loss.

Love & Eternal Light,

EA

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2007-10-17 06:28 AM

very real, personal, powerfully emotive 'write'!

[My brother to be, (Robert) was similarly lost,
  therefore these emotions are quite familiar
  to me...leaving me as an 'only' in a lonely
  world...I have always wished I had
  siblings]

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2007-10-17 09:46 AM

A very sad state of affairs, Preston, but you have written it well. My condolences.

Helen

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2007-10-19 06:56 AM

I'm sorry for your loss Preston.. this was expressed very beautifully.. sending you some special

hugs to keep you warm.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2007-10-19 11:48 AM

enjoyed

The_Nameless_One
Member

since 2007-01-20

Posts 165
Missouri

9 posted 2007-10-20 10:00 AM

thank you everyone for your concern

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