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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-10-16 06:35 AM

you had your busy blouse buttoned
and we were in the hurry line
driving backwards to make it last
but there was rain expected
as there is in all love songs

so you put on your prince songs
and we parked for five minute hours
in the drive thru car wash
with the windows down in my mind
and you had your secret umbrella

and put your fingers over my mouth
when I whispered love words
you just wanted my hold you close
and some slow shoulder company
but you knew I brought you everything

in the semi of my watch pocket willing

____________

daark

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-10-16 06:53 AM

ooh la laa Mr Daark.... nice imagery here! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2007-10-16 06:57 AM

you just wanted my hold you close
and some slow shoulder company

I love how you word ....
everything

M

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2007-10-16 09:22 AM

"and put your fingers over my mouth
when I whispered love words
you just wanted my hold you close"

really enjoyed this...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2007-10-16 05:28 PM

ms R & B, thanks lady

___________

Ms MMS, thank you hon

____________

Ms Suesea, thanks babe for the read

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2007-10-17 08:53 AM

Just me... coming back for another read... still the same.. oooh la laa Mr Daark!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2007-10-17 09:22 AM

Wonderful write, DS! Enjoyed!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2007-10-17 04:04 PM

and put your fingers over my mouth
when I whispered love words
you just wanted my hold you close
and some slow shoulder company
but you knew I brought you everything
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

soft D stuff, lovely...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2007-10-17 04:06 PM

Wonderful...James

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2007-10-18 06:41 AM

ms R & B...come back often please...thanks babe

______________

ms honeybunch, thank you for your eyes here

___________

ms gs, thanks babe for he touch

__________

friend james, thank you so much

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2007-10-18 10:18 AM

"but there was rain expected
as there is in all love songs

so you put on your prince songs
and we parked for five minute hours"

just loving this...so much...you know this makes me smile...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2007-10-21 03:29 PM

thanks ms suesea

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