Open Poetry #41 |
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A Whisper In The Wind |
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Country New Member
since 2007-10-15
Posts 6 |
I'm new here and I know I should read for awhile and make some comments on other works, but I like to jump right in.It is my perfered way of learning.So I'm going to post one of mine and I look forward to your comments. A WHISPER IN THE WIND She hears her name spoken softly in the dark Sweeter then the sound of a meadowlark Turning around to find him, searching for his face In that lonely empty space It’s just a whisper in the wind Her heart beats like the pounding of a drum Tears fill her dark eyes, she is overcome She begins to tremble and falls to her knees Listens for a sound on the breeze A single whisper in the wind In reality she knows he was never here She closes her eyes, tries to draw him near Wills her heart from her body into the night That shines for her like a blinding light She’s just a whisper in the wind In her mind she finds him, two hearts join as one If only for a while they lay out in the sun Joyful in the joining like a soft melody Love lifts them up, sets them free Like a gentle whisper in the wind She feels the pull as her body calls her heart Time and distance pulling them apart Holding on, she can’t let go Of love and joy she’s come to know Nothing but a whisper in the wind Soon she loses sight of him in a distant mist A fading memory, a feeling, a kiss Drifting away, her vision becomes dim With a lonely tear, calls out to him Sends a whisper in the wind |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Country~ Ah ... we both seem to love the wind ... the gentle thoughts it blows our way~ This is lovely and again I welcome you to our PiP circle~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Welcome Country. I hope you enjoy the site, I haven't been here long myself. Lovely first post, Ida |
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Country New Member
since 2007-10-15
Posts 6 |
Thank you guys. I look forward to learning alot here and getting some constructive critism and meeting some very nice people. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
With a title as lovely as "A Whisper In The Wind" and an author with the name of "Country" ~ I was sure to stop by! ~ and I'm glad I did! ![]() Your gentle words were whispering to my own heart. A lovely write! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel ![]() |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful Words ARCTIC WIND |
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Country New Member
since 2007-10-15
Posts 6 |
I am overwhelmed by your kind words. I am also very happy if my words gave you enjoyment. Thanks. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Pip! These are lovely whispers in the wind, it is an enjoyable read. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
An interesting and melodic progression! Welcome to this place! ~glider~ |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Welcome to Pips, Country, I'm sure you will enjoy all the interaction with the other poets. Nice write. Lindsay |
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