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The edge of your mind
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The edge of your mind |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Over the edge of your mind Watch me rise over the edge of your mind like the morning sun while sleep slowly deserts you carrying away the secrets of your dreams. Receive me within your thoughts start this new day with me kissing you awake stretch like a cat and moan your pleasure to the gifts of today. Climb out of slumber feel the energy of love prickling you say hello and smile let your heart and your feet steer you to the mysterious place where happiness resides. Hello! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, the way you greet the sun is wonderful...enjoyed this much |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Beautiful morning poem.  Love it! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"stretch like a cat and moan your pleasure to the gifts of today." yes Margherita a wonderful wake up poem |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Hello Margherita, This is a well constructed love poem. It's very well done. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love it, Margherita. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
beautiful ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Hello" to you! May all your morns begin in such a glorious manner. Your poem not only made my lips smile, but  did, as well.  Happy hugs, Linda  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful! What a wonderful way to start a morning. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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rugged_miss Junior Member
since 2007-10-27
Posts 26 |
So peaceful I could actually feel myself drifting away in the calm .. Thanks for the warm welcome. You've enlightened me on coping strategies.. You're doing pretty well for one whose 3rd language is English |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful~ My spirit will rise |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are all so kind dear Poet friends. Thank you for your time. Love, Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Very romantic Margherita, you certainly have a way with words. enjoyed. Lindsay |
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nevermore93 Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 73 |
margharita are you also interloper? i was wondering for both of you posted on my poem war, and both of your member names are Rara Avis. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Lindsay! Dear nevermore93 what a funny question! No, I am just Margherita, the name "Rara Avis" refers to the number of replies one has accumulated, if you check you will find many others who are given this same "qualifying" name, it is not the login name. Dear Interloper is a man, I am a woman. Anyway you made me smile! Thank you for that! Love, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
*Smiles*....Now that is a wakeup call! *hugs*.....jo |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Howdy Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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