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Warrior Bristo
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 96
Arizona
0 posted 2007-10-13 01:03 AM


Phantom


I will disappear
And they will begin
To doubt my existence
here
I will be like a
Phantom amongst
Them
Quick, silent, and unseen
They will ponder My whereabouts
Till the wondering
Will cease and
I shall be forgotten
This poem has actually been published

warrior undefeated
  

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2007-10-13 03:13 AM

I like this one, Warrior Bisto nice write.
                                    Ida
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2007-10-13 03:24 AM

Beautiful, but disturbing.  My wish for you is not only that they see, love and appreciate you, but that you are made aware of that.  

Hugs

- Owl
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