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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-10-11 10:48 AM

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Today I will think
Of autumn leaves
Oak red and orange
Falling in hope
Of finally touching her hair

The sun which because
It can not say her name
Expressing with light
How it feels

I will muse on squirrels
That know they’ll make her smile
And laugh as they leap with little hops
Gathering acorns from the ground

Blue skies and white clouds
Sea stars and snowy moon
But most of all that she is here

.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-10-11 12:33 PM

So beautiful, John.

Love,
Margherita

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

2 posted 2007-10-11 12:36 PM

I love all of your autumn writings. Lovely.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2007-10-11 10:16 PM

Another most pleasant impression with a
special minimalistic touch of fine Romanticism!

I am particularly fond of the image
juxtaposition:

“Sea stars and snowy moon”

AND:

“…Autumn leaves
Oak red and orange
Falling in hope
Of … touching her hair”

v. serious applause!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-10-12 06:19 PM

Wonderful...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2007-10-13 06:40 AM

oh this is lovely John... nice to see your pic too!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2007-10-13 08:59 AM

Show her this gem, John, and she cannot help but to smile for you and be with you always!

- Owl

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

7 posted 2007-10-13 01:08 PM

Well, we don't have those nce fall colors her but the sentiment is for sure here.

very good
adagio

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2007-10-16 10:53 AM

Well, I hope this one is about real emotions because it is quite beautiful.
Ida

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

9 posted 2007-10-16 10:56 AM

indeed a very beautiful and warm one for Fall.

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