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Open Poetry #41

Mission In Mexico

Warrior Bristo
Member

since 2007-07-28

Posts 96
Arizona

0 posted 2007-10-09 04:23 PM

Never does the night
Humble itself to the hours
Of lost sleep and anguish

Life stirrs questionably
In the fifth hour,
But night prevails

Beneath the crucifix
The men are asleep,
But I know they will
Arise strong, ready and
Eager to move on
I must begin my day
Before the morning errupts...

In the sixth hour
The sun is now risen
yet all remains still,
Has death become them
In the night!?
Arise and greet the
Glorious morn!
We are bound for Mexico
To help those forlorn!

warrior undefeated

[This message has been edited by Warrior Bristo (10-09-2007 06:59 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2007-10-09 05:05 PM

sounds interesting~~

M

Warrior Bristo
Member

since 2007-07-28

Posts 96
Arizona

2 posted 2007-10-09 05:06 PM

interesting how?

warrior undefeated

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-10-09 05:08 PM

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2007-10-09 06:50 PM

check "prevails"...typo heh, heh...

Warrior Bristo
Member

since 2007-07-28

Posts 96
Arizona

5 posted 2007-10-09 07:00 PM

thanks for that. I fixed it.

warrior undefeated

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2007-10-09 07:40 PM

We are bound for Mexico
To help those forlorn!

interesting in the "bound for"...to help

M

Warrior Bristo
Member

since 2007-07-28

Posts 96
Arizona

7 posted 2007-10-09 10:30 PM

I still don't understand.

warrior undefeated

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