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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2007-10-09 10:53 AM



How Many Moons Have I ?
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Tell me
oh please, how many
moons have I yet to phase
across alluring nights of love
I have peaked in the crescent
knowing new love's on the rise
I have basked in the knowing
I am soon set to glowing
with the love shining
in your eyes~

And ... that's but the half of it~

~I have
risen so half-full
to the specter of you
Shrouded in mystery of
the time we spent apart
Glowed in full-measure
of pure pleasure sent
from bright glow
of heart~

How many moons have I~

~Again, you phase in
the fullest of soon-rising orb
of soft alabaster glow, wanting only
that you should know - you catch me in
your loving light and hold me in raptured
shine of the night - fully extending rays
of soft glow - spilling of such thrill seeps
through my heart and my soul as to keep
me in mesmerize reflected in another's
eyes Waiting for soft expelled sighs
that lay across a diamond sky
in phases full of realize
the glow of love~


And then ... there you glow again~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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jwesley
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1 posted 2007-10-09 10:59 AM


Beautiful Marge...


nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2007-10-09 05:05 PM


I agree with jw~~ beautiful moons~~

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3 posted 2007-10-09 05:09 PM


This is so beautiful, Marge.
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4 posted 2007-10-09 05:10 PM


Beautiful indeed


ARCTIC WIND

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5 posted 2007-10-09 07:25 PM


for whatever my ever-most-humble opinion is worth...THIS is one of the absolute best 'writes' I have seen from this grand-fine human being...or anyone else, anywhere...

so wonderfully 'crafted' and 'shaped' in every possibly way [visually, poetically, romantically, lunarily(guess I may have 'invented' that word?!; etc.)]

VERY serious and long-sustained applause!!

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2007-10-10 11:12 AM


Thank you ALL so very much for letting me share this~

It is among my own personal favorites of my 'moonies'~

Someday ... someday ... a book with this title ... yes~
I WILL make it happen~

Bruce~
Your own little *huglet*~
Thank you for such a wonderful compliment~

*HUGLETS* to all~
~*MargeOfTheLunaBright*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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7 posted 2007-10-13 09:58 AM


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I marvel at the work you put into these little beauties....It takes codes and codes and codes to make them look so perfect, and I wouldn't have the patience, let alone the inspiration!

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8 posted 2007-10-13 10:22 AM


MT, you must be over the moon with how beautifully this turned out. This piece of lunar magic is muy bonita!

SmileyCentral.com

This was brilliant ~ in more ways than one!

Love & Luna Light,

EO SmileyCentral.com

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9 posted 2007-10-13 11:03 AM


Wow, wow, wow, dear Marge!!!

This is indeed spectacular!

Incredible work of art.

Love and hugs.

It's a keeper!

Margherita

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10 posted 2007-10-13 11:09 AM


OhMySweetheartOfAFriendEd~
You, and your ever-watchful eyes, are so very special to me ...~
Thank you~
I LunaLove Ya'~

EarthyOne~
Thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed it too~

MzMargherita~
It ALWAYS delights me to see you in the light of the Moon~

As those who know me will attest,
I do a whole bunch of 'mooning'
and sometimes in jest~
But the true beauty is in my adore
of the next phasing that Luna holds in store~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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11 posted 2007-10-13 12:29 PM


Very well done!
adagio

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2007-11-26 09:59 AM


Slipping some little thank you's in here~

I sure LOVE the lovely Luna in all her phases~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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