Open Poetry #41 |
Re-Phasing of 'How Many Moons Have I ?' |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
How Many Moons Have I ? ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Tell me oh please, how many moons have I yet to phase across alluring nights of love I have peaked in the crescent knowing new love's on the rise I have basked in the knowing I am soon set to glowing with the love shining in your eyes~ And ... that's but the half of it~ ~I have risen so half-full to the specter of you Shrouded in mystery of the time we spent apart Glowed in full-measure of pure pleasure sent from bright glow of heart~ How many moons have I~ ~Again, you phase in the fullest of soon-rising orb of soft alabaster glow, wanting only that you should know - you catch me in your loving light and hold me in raptured shine of the night - fully extending rays of soft glow - spilling of such thrill seeps through my heart and my soul as to keep me in mesmerize reflected in another's eyes Waiting for soft expelled sighs that lay across a diamond sky in phases full of realize the glow of love~ And then ... there you glow again~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful Marge... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I agree with jw~~ beautiful moons~~ M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful, Marge. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
for whatever my ever-most-humble opinion is worth...THIS is one of the absolute best 'writes' I have seen from this grand-fine human being...or anyone else, anywhere... so wonderfully 'crafted' and 'shaped' in every possibly way [visually, poetically, romantically, lunarily(guess I may have 'invented' that word?!; etc.)] VERY serious and long-sustained applause!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you ALL so very much for letting me share this~ It is among my own personal favorites of my 'moonies'~ Someday ... someday ... a book with this title ... yes~ I WILL make it happen~ Bruce~ Your own little *huglet*~ Thank you for such a wonderful compliment~ *HUGLETS* to all~ ~*MargeOfTheLunaBright*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
At least one....... /pip/Forum102/HTML/000270.html I marvel at the work you put into these little beauties....It takes codes and codes and codes to make them look so perfect, and I wouldn't have the patience, let alone the inspiration! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
MT, you must be over the moon with how beautifully this turned out. This piece of lunar magic is muy bonita! This was brilliant ~ in more ways than one! Love & Luna Light, EO |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, wow, wow, dear Marge!!! This is indeed spectacular! Incredible work of art. Love and hugs. It's a keeper! Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhMySweetheartOfAFriendEd~ You, and your ever-watchful eyes, are so very special to me ...~ Thank you~ I LunaLove Ya'~ EarthyOne~ Thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed it too~ MzMargherita~ It ALWAYS delights me to see you in the light of the Moon~ As those who know me will attest, I do a whole bunch of 'mooning' and sometimes in jest~ But the true beauty is in my adore of the next phasing that Luna holds in store~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very well done! adagio |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Slipping some little thank you's in here~ I sure LOVE the lovely Luna in all her phases~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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