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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2007-10-06 07:17 PM

***

Raindrop whispers

***
Hold me close sweet Love
through the supple drum sound
of raindrops playing memories
of long gone summer afternoons
when the first timid stirrings
colored my cheeks to match
the boldest red rose petals
offering their lessons of charm
basking cheerfully in the sun.
When my heartbeat fluttered
in rapturous anticipation
of tender fingers lifting my chin
to align my lips to his
when my eyes met his and trusted.

Hold me close sweet Love,
while autumn’s melancholy
strums the silver strings of the rain
recalling my frozen smiles
of those long gone times
when my blossoming
wasn’t given its full season,
when he pretended to know
how to gratify my soul
but got the timing all wrong.

Within your arms my Love,
I now listen to the rain
whispering tunes of hope
so that I may claim back
the dreams of pure harmony
I was once meant to dream
under the cloudless indigo skies
of the springtime of my life.
* * *

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-10-06 07:24 PM

nice 'write'...matching the fine photo.-image and its title!

I am particularly fond of:

"while autumn’s melancholy
strums the silver strings of the rain"

Applause!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2007-10-06 07:31 PM

"while autumn’s melancholy
strums the silver strings of the rain"
oh, how incredibly beautiful!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2007-10-07 12:48 PM

Wonderful write, Marherita!

"recalling my frozen smiles
of those long gone times
when my blossoming
wasn’t given its full season,
when he pretended to know
how to gratify my soul
but got the timing all wrong."

Yes, I also recall those times and, of course, nothing is ever right if the timing is wrong. I'm obviously not the only one who "digs deep".

I enjoyed being in your "deep".

Helen

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-10-07 06:13 AM

Silky...James

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2007-10-07 07:27 AM

as a spring bed waits
for the lovers of the dawn
so are your petals
waiting for the rain

lovely work ms mar

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2007-10-07 05:46 PM

your words
are tender petals
that bloom
in the heart

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

7 posted 2007-10-07 06:43 PM

Margherita,

I like this one. It moves along smoothly, and tells a good tale.

Bobby

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2007-10-07 06:54 PM

VERY BEAUTIFUL

ARCTIC WIND

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

9 posted 2007-10-07 10:51 PM

A very passionate, sensitive write.

The word "tender" comes to mind.

Corinne

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

10 posted 2007-10-08 12:38 PM

"Within your arms my Love,
I now listen to the rain"

ahhh rainy day woman
you capture my imagination
lovely Margherita

Tears-of-Sanity
Member

since 2007-09-05

Posts 121
Kingdom Hearts

11 posted 2007-10-08 12:59 PM

Very nice...
I enjoyed it quite a lot

Tears of Sanity~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2007-10-08 08:17 AM

Margherita~
If English is your third language ... then your fourth must be HEART~

GORGEOUS dear lady~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2007-10-08 09:24 PM

Within your arms my Love,
I now listen to the rain
whispering tunes of hope

Oh my Margherita!! This is so beautiful... all of it.
I love the graphic, the poem, everything. It's
so pretty. And, I also love your photo, sweet lady.
Hugs,
Ethel

Abena Williams
Junior Member

since 2007-10-08

Posts 25
England

14 posted 2007-10-09 08:34 AM

Hello,

This was such a beautiful poem to read.
The last five lines of your first verse had me hooked, as we all know what that feels like - heart-melting!

Abena x

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

15 posted 2007-10-09 09:10 AM

Margherita, may springtime forever reside within your loving, romantic ~ and highly poetic!!!!!! ~ heart!

I was sighing all the while I was reading.

Love to you, my deserving friend,

Angelo Terrestre

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

16 posted 2007-10-09 08:01 PM

Within your arms my Love,
I now listen to the rain
whispering tunes of hope
so that I may claim back
the dreams of pure harmony
I was once meant to dream
under the cloudless indigo skies
of the springtime of my life.

even this could stand alone~~ beautiful~~

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

17 posted 2007-10-10 11:49 AM

Thank you all from my heart for reading and commenting so kindly. You warm my heart.
Love,
Margherita

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

18 posted 2007-10-10 03:32 PM

Beautiful dear lady. And I love the red rose.
hugs, Marti

Home is not where you live,
but where they understand you!
~~ Cristion Morgenstern

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