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Open Poetry #41

Feelings

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2007-07-21 09:34 PM

Feelings
Show me your heart,
show me yur feeling,
Show me tomorrow's night
Show me love,
Love 's so right,
Tonight,
I will stay,
No matter what,
Feeling,
Show me your feeling,
To me,
Make me know,
you,
Let me touch you,
Till the morning's light,
Feelings,
Feeling that can't deny,
Show my feeling,
To you,
To the tomorrow's night,
Never say goodbye,
To the night,
Feelings can stay,
Show me your feelings,
feelings,
Show me your love,
Show me to the night,
Feelings,

Jess
Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 243
Washington

1 posted 2007-07-21 09:43 PM

you know, if you added to this I think it could make a good song. The word "feeling" could be like the hook, or part of it anyway.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2007-07-21 10:13 PM

I agree...definitely got the makings...

jwesley

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-07-22 09:22 PM

actions speak louder than words, for sure

lovely write!

Hyaunt
Member

since 2007-07-12

Posts 74

4 posted 2007-07-24 12:43 PM

very true.

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