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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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as dawn hesitates behind her distance I meander into this realization that old men and young men are the same when they dream about the women who are always oceans beyond the afternoons of dunes out of reach but within grasp perhaps as they gasp their panting hands wishing their bows were in furrow of those jaunty tide gypsies though their reality is rudderless drifting away to time's angry deserts from behind this blinded mountain where your voice is a damp horizon I strum the sand of screen to view a whispered yes or perhaps today would bring a beachcomber's healing ____________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ahhh yes D, and dreams are such wonderful things, no matter the age yes? I personally, love dreams where I can get lost in the fantasy...  Nicely done bigD. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms GS |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You touch many a chord with this amazing write, D. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms mar, thank you lady friend for your eyes. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
stranger darlin' this is truly exquisite |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, you dance my mind with your eyes, thank you babe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
from behind this blinded mountain where your voice is a damp horizon I strum the sand of screen to view a whispered yes or perhaps today... there are times when you know how to touch~~ M |
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